ray's caress girls hair
sun shines on the golden beach
beach ball moves slowly
flowers shine brightly
three legged dog barks loudly
breeze startles my eyes
children splash around
water gushing back and to
laughter hits my ears
bats and balls flying
running forward and backwards
crashing to the ground
leaves fall silently
birds singing in the blue sky
animals pass by
I particularly like the 2nd and the 3rd haiku, Claire: vivid language and great sounds- barks/splash/gush.
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