growing up we were never close
as the years progressed we became inseparable
told you my darkest secrets
along with all the happy things
there was no secrets to hide
when i needed you, you was there
why didn't you put that trust in me
and tell me the things i needed to know
just hurts that's all
got to look forward now
the future is bright
and we will fight it together
I love this....the 3rd verse gives off it's share of pain and/or frustration.
ReplyDeleteFinal part...Its good to know that Positive thoughts is working for you :) x
in the 2nd stanza or couplet you could change the 'was' to 'were' as the rest of the poem isn't written in slang.
ReplyDeleteI like it very much, feels like lyrics to a song. Maybe you could learn guitar to go with it? ; ) x